Play the Essay Critiquing Game (Again)!

In my last post, I offered you the chance to play the Essay Critiquing Game. Did you nail it? Did you miss some errors? Here’s a second bite at the Essay Critiquing Cherry! Sarah writes a much more passionate essay about keeping a snake as a pet. After beginning with a creative title, she resists…

Play the Essay Critiquing Game!

Here’s your chance to practice your essay-flaw detection skills by critiquing the following example essay: A fictional organization, the 42nd Street Herpetological Society, is offering a $1,000 scholarship to a worthy high school student who has an interest in reptile ownership. The essay question requirements are as follows: “Tell us in a paragraph of ten…